Newgrounds.com — Everything, By Everyone.
Age/Gender: 24, Male
Location: San Luis Obispo, CA
Job: Student
Newgrounds Stats
Whistle Status: Normal
Exp. Points: 1,050 / 1,110
Exp. Rank #: 28,460
Voting Pow.: 5.24 votes
BBS Posts: 0 (0 per day)
Flash Reviews: 87
Music Reviews: 0
Trophies: 0
Stickers: 0
Latest Flash Reviews
You just need to make it faster. Hit the lines faster, make the dialog flow into the story. Maybe you can also work with backgrounds. It was good and could be funnier. Try to experiment with sound effects also.
Author's Response:
i agree with most of what your saying except... the backrounds.. for me i thought this would be best with a plain white backround... i dont know why but to me i feel it just goes better with it.. plus i cant do great backrounds taht correspond with with the video
- Rate this review:
- Helpful!
- Useless.
- Flag as abusive.
There was something deeply disturbing about that video, but it was pretty sick. I liked the off bright colors you used. It made the flash friendlier. Anyhow, Happy Birthday! Good flash.
- Rate this review:
- Helpful!
- Useless.
- Flag as abusive.
The artwork is there, but no story. Personally, I was kind of disgusted by it, but as far as flash goes: you need to add some music and some background or storyline. It feels very fast, so you may want to slow down some of the scenes. Given your drawing skills, I hope to see more flashes from you. . . . .maybe a bit classier ones.
- Rate this review:
- Helpful!
- Useless.
- Flag as abusive.