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Good stick fight video, especially for a first. The timing is super fast. Good animations normally vary up the time and makes sure that the movements are enunciated well so that the audience can understand them. I like that you use different motifs that morph into other ones (multiple diamond to a crystal).
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The game was very enjoyable. If I can make a few suggestions, it would be to make the flash wider, so that you can see the enemies coming. Also, the ducking is a bit tough because the character will not duck if the cursor goes off the window. I love the story line and the characters, although I didn't finish it all yet. Another improvement for a later would be making some kind of target points on the enemy, where you can do different styles of combo by clicking on the various points. But all in all; a solid game. Good Job.
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You just need to make it faster. Hit the lines faster, make the dialog flow into the story. Maybe you can also work with backgrounds. It was good and could be funnier. Try to experiment with sound effects also.
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i agree with most of what your saying except... the backrounds.. for me i thought this would be best with a plain white backround... i dont know why but to me i feel it just goes better with it.. plus i cant do great backrounds taht correspond with with the video
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