Score: 7

"Great Beginning"

submission: Stickfight(first flash)

date: November 5, 2009

Good stick fight video, especially for a first. The timing is super fast. Good animations normally vary up the time and makes sure that the movements are enunciated well so that the audience can understand them. I like that you use different motifs that morph into other ones (multiple diamond to a crystal).

Score: 8

"Very Enjoyable"

submission: Young Lee

date: December 30, 2008

The game was very enjoyable. If I can make a few suggestions, it would be to make the flash wider, so that you can see the enemies coming. Also, the ducking is a bit tough because the character will not duck if the cursor goes off the window. I love the story line and the characters, although I didn't finish it all yet. Another improvement for a later would be making some kind of target points on the enemy, where you can do different styles of combo by clicking on the various points. But all in all; a solid game. Good Job.

Score: 6

"Okay"

submission: Peview of wat to come

date: July 12, 2008

You just need to make it faster. Hit the lines faster, make the dialog flow into the story. Maybe you can also work with backgrounds. It was good and could be funnier. Try to experiment with sound effects also.

Score: 9

"Merose"

submission: It's My Birthday!

date: July 10, 2008

There was something deeply disturbing about that video, but it was pretty sick. I liked the off bright colors you used. It made the flash friendlier. Anyhow, Happy Birthday! Good flash.

Score: 3

"Good Artistic skills"

submission: The Adventures Of Fetus

date: July 8, 2008

The artwork is there, but no story. Personally, I was kind of disgusted by it, but as far as flash goes: you need to add some music and some background or storyline. It feels very fast, so you may want to slow down some of the scenes. Given your drawing skills, I hope to see more flashes from you. . . . .maybe a bit classier ones.

Score: 4

"Functional Problems"

submission: Battle of the Bacon

date: July 4, 2008

The concept of this flash is fine. The initial theme song was too short for the flash. Unfortunately, the entire flash was too laggy on my computer. I found that abnormal since your flash only had stick figure elements throughout. I would suggest that you find ways to make your flash efficient. Other than that the flash isn't bad.

Score: 6

"Solid Flash"

submission: Fun With Fireworks

date: July 4, 2008

The flash work is solid. Everything was well done. I wasn't quite sure if you were going for dark humor or trying to send out a message or something of that nature. Is the fire in the pants symbolism? Or is it supposed to be funny? Your aim wasn't so clear to me, but good audio and visual work.

Score: 7

"Haha"

submission: Guitar Hero On Tour lol

date: July 3, 2008

Even though you're ragging on GH, the flash was freakin hillarious. I doan like the DS myself, but I love GH. I could tell that it was one voice that played all the characters. Comic timing is pretty good.

Score: 2

"Wrong Application"

submission: Destroying The Web Part1

date: July 3, 2008

Maybe you could have made this a game instead of a movie. Maybe it would have been more entertaining that way.

Score: 2

"Announcement"

submission: Hero Man Preview

date: July 2, 2008

This is a god awful flash that does not have any value. Basically, this is an announcement of your work that you can easily do on a forum. The character's facial actions did not match the dialog and your prompt is not spelled correctly. I would rather just watched your work when you release it, instead of watching this announcement. Sorry dude, try better.